Lady Macbeth
SIGN: Cancer
Horriscope: Inspiration and insights that come through dreams could give you the boost you need to get your career on track. You may have been kicking different ideas around for a while, but what you realize today could motivate you to act. Formulate a strategy before you begin. As long as you make the effort to stay focused, efficient, and practical, whatever you decide today might work.
A: 8/10
ReplyDeleteMost of the details you have included are relevant However, I am slightly confused what you are referring to when you speak about dreams. Overall, this is clever way to to write this prediction, as you have written it so that it seems Lady Macbeth will end up with a positive outcome from her doings, which to an extent is true and you portray this well.
B: 7/10
You ideas flow from one to another and the written structure is good. However, the presentation looks a bit untidy, as you have random large space between words.
C: 9/10
Your horoscope is written is an appropriate style for the context, and includes some detail on what will happen to Lady Macbeth. You also have appropriate punctuation. However, horoscopes are supposed to be fairly vague, yet seem specific and sometimes you have included a little too much detail, such as when you say today- you could replace this with 'soon', or something less direct.